erm..tis time is better thn last time u present de.gambateh..^^ erm..i knoe u wan to look as simple ..but if u add more details on that , it may had a look as well.anyway .tuesday gambateh a!!
Much better compare to your first version which shown during your last presentation.
Yet, I still think there are room for improvement. For example the typo, font is a bit too big and the alignment is not properly done, try take a look at your contact page and you will understand what I mean.
1st at all , the content line length is too long, for user is hard to read, can make it shorter will be better. typo and font type can choose better to create the mood of "tattoo" check : www.dafont.com... good luck :)
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erm..tis time is better thn last time u present de.gambateh..^^ erm..i knoe u wan to look as simple ..but if u add more details on that , it may had a look as well.anyway .tuesday gambateh a!!
Much better compare to your first version which shown during your last presentation.
Yet, I still think there are room for improvement. For example the typo, font is a bit too big and the alignment is not properly done, try take a look at your contact page and you will understand what I mean.
Good luck for your presentation.
Best regards,
Yik Jian
seems that you're interested in tattoos.
i'm a tattoo apprentice, and you can drop by the shop i work at, if you need inspiration.:D
the place is called Inked Tattoo Studio. it's just behind The One Academy, above D'Sayang.
1st at all , the content line length is too long, for user is hard to read, can make it shorter will be better.
typo and font type can choose better to create the mood of "tattoo" check : www.dafont.com...
good luck :)
thanks a lot
too all of your comments
^_^
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